CRITIQUES URGENTLY NEEDED PLZ

This is my sketch for my final art project.

Thanks to for the inspiration. I took your idea you suggested and made it into my own, changed some things


ANYWAYS


I NEED SOME PEOPLE WHO ARE REALLY GOOD AT MALE ANATOMY TO REDLINE THIS FOR ME PLEASE

and fill in the torso in the mirror D: for I EPIC FAIL AT MALE ANATOMY... he's without a shirt fyi
Please! I am really in need of constructive critiques and redlines.